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Language Hacker Award V

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Posted on 25th July 2010 by Jade Handy in Language Hacker Award |Reverse Engineered

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Each week, we’re offering up a Language Hacker Award (or three) for those that have exhibited the expertise to exercise with excellence the exegesis of expression.

This is the best of what’s out there in terms of the demonstrated understanding of persuasive communication no matter the context and industry.  So, in other words, what I’m into and who’s into what I’m into.  Hahmana hahmana,what?… I know.

This week, we’re honoring 1 language artist…

Gary Vaynerchuk is a big deal.  I previously had been exposed to Crush It, but more so the teachings of the book and not so much the author.  Then, a friend posted this web 2.o expo YouTube video

You don’t have to like wine to like this guy on WineLibrary TV.

It quickly became obvious to me that Gary is a natural Language Hacker.  Natural Language Hackers are my favorite kind.  They probably haven’t studied language, sales, rhetoric, linguistics, or anything in terms of language arts, yet they have learned things along their life path that has worked.

I went through the YouTube video and over analyzed it for your reading pleasure.  Because there was so many language patterns and persuasive elements, I can’t do it justice for you in an organized fashion here in one blog post.  So, I’m just going to highlight some of the dominant patterns.  Dominant patterns are easier to pick up on, anyway.

The first thing I noticed is his use of repetition.  His energy is great, of course, but that’s not what makes him great at speaking.  What makes him great is, for example, tying the last words of one sentence to the next sentence by repeating the exact same words or phrase.  Notice, this paragraph has an example.  In rhetoric, this is called anadiplosis.  It helps you connect the dots vs. just collecting thoughts. e.g. “…starts with yourself.  Look yourself in the mirror.”

Speaking of repetition, several patterns are his strong suit.  He uses repetition well.  Anaphora, alliteration, commoratio.  In my Catchy to be Sticky post, I wrote about several of his patterns.  It’s as if he tore out this post and carried it around with him until he knew them like the back of his hand.  Other repeater examples are ”want to talk about” “need to care” “listen” “you have to” “you know” remember “pp…patience and passion”

Most of his repeaters are just repeating words or phrases consecutively just for the sake of repeating words or phrases consecutively.  Actually, they are for the sake of attention, amplification and impact. e.g. ”make some cash along the way” “freemium”

For him, it’s not just exact words and phrases, but also, concepts like, “…I can do that shit…what I decided I wanted to do” “Let’s talk about community.  Listen to your users.”  “This isn’t about parties.  We’re building businesses” 

He also repeats beats.  Notice he repeats sounds and rhythm.  But you have to listen for those.

If you’re wondering what makes him so funny, then I’ll tell you it’s because he employs the rule of three, ending with exaggeration and simple truth.  I haven’t written much on that, so it will be fun for you to research it.  Promise me you will.  I’ll pay you! 

Catch Gary on | Twitter | Wine Library TV | Tumblr | RSS | garyvaynerchuk.com

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So, there you have it, the Language Hacker Award recipient on this day in history, July 25th, 2010!

Tim Ferriss Reverse Engineers Himself

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Posted on 16th April 2010 by Jade Handy in Reverse Engineered

On Fire…fox 3.6.2

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Posted on 6th April 2010 by Jade Handy in Let's Talk About Language |Marketing/PR |Persuasion |Reverse Engineered

 

Here’s the latest from Firefox.  Does it surprise me that Firefox has made a name for itself?  No.  Especially no, after seeing this persuasion-packed piece.

What’s so special about it?  Well for starters, it has 10 elements of persuasion.  10!

Let’s take it from the top.  The Header, alone, has these 5 elements based off of “For security reasons, we recommend downloading the latest and greatest version”: 1. The sequence frames the reason first, then the “what.” This strategy gives the WIIFM right off the bat. 2. Gives a reason.  Humans are wired to need a reason. 3. The reason is security.  Who can deny this is compelling in today’s world? See, also, ”secure” email offer. Security must be important as it is at the beginning and the end of the reading path. 4. It’s recommended.  Versus “you decide.” 5. Latest and greatest is a rhyme.  Since the beginning of time, rhyme has been there to aid us and persuade us. Catchy, yes?

“Choose your persona.  Roll over to try, click to apply. See all 30,000+”  6. Choose vs. “we recommend.”  Put’s the decision back in users hands.  7. Your persona.  You own it. 8. Your Persona. Generation XY and Z, hello. Who wants to be like everyone else? 9. Roll over.  Roll over?   Resistance is futile! 10. Try. No vows necessary. 11. Just click.  How simple is that!? 12. Apply.  As in application or to put on? When is the “install”? 13.  Try – Apply.  There’s that rhyming thing, again. 14. To try – To apply.  To this To that.  To cool To go To school #polysyndeton Used to connect things. 15. See all… Studies show less is more, but for those others out there…

“Stay Connected,” my child.  Don’t know why I said that, it just came to mind, I guess.  16. Sit. “Stay” Roll over.  Like most actions, you’re either starting something, stopping something or continuing (Stay) something.  Continuing has a nice ring to it. Yeah, like Ka-Ching! 17. Connected.  Why do they want me to feel something? See also, “Roll over” “click” “running” 18. They give three choices.  Studies show less is more19. Click not just a choice, you’re choosing an action.

Feeling manipulated, yet? Hey, I’m just the messenger.

“New Thunderbird 3. Fast, Flexible and Secure Email Program.  Download Thunderbird”  20. New vs. old.  New vs. improved. New vs. version 3?  Sounds contradictory, eh?  21. Thunderbird.  Not exactly namby-pamby. 22. 3. What happened to “new?” Sounds to me like a bit of a conflict, you? 23. Download Thunderbird.  Sounds like a command.  Yes, ma’am.

24. Quick bursts of words vs. long complete drawn out sentences like you would use in a conversation in order for the listener to understand and absorb what you’re actually saying when you actually have to explain yourself or else they’ll most likely not take action.

10 Jade? OK, I lied, make it 25.  Something for everyone.  Contrasting… 3 choices to stay connected – See all 30,o00+. We recommend – Choose Your Persona. Decide based on the 3 boxes diplayed (Persona, Stay Connected, Thunderbird) – More Firefox 3.6 features.  Some things to see - feel others (not at work, though.)

OK, fine.  26. Watch the video…See all 30,000+. Visual modality congruence.

Dang it.  27. Fast, Flexible and Secure…. Rule of 3 using alliteration.

I give in.  28. Eye-popping color graphics layed out in an non-cluttered appealing fashion.

Is Firefox familiar? 29. No wonder they didn’t rename the whole damn thing.  Ford Taurus paid an ugly price for this lesson.

If you find any others, let me know.  I may not post it, though, ’cause I’m already sick of this post.

30. Six, count them, six arrows pointing right, right?  For most people this means forward.

OK, I’m done.

Except for # 31. What’s written in the biggest, boldest font in the biggest most colorful box and on the left side (people typically read left to right.  That is, they “start” on the left and continue on from there) of the page?  That’s right.  Choose Your Persona.  Wonder why?

Did it work on me?  Did you notice “You’re Now Running Firefox 3.6.2? ‘Nuf said.

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Make it simple. Make it memorable. Make it inviting to look at. Make it fun to read.  -Leo Burnett

We’re obviously going to spend a lot in marketing because we think the product sells itself.  -Jim Allchin

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